You have written clearly, using technical language. You need to put this redraft next to the original post, and label it, as your work is very difficult to navigate. You haven't added any stills, as I requested in the first comments. Vanessa
You have written clearly, using technical language. You need to put this redraft next to the original post, and label it, as your work is very difficult to navigate. You haven't added any stills, as I requested in the first comments. Vanessa
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